My veins are conduits for
electric current. Synapse to
synapse the brain snaps on.
Skip sleep and glow, wait to
catch the copper dawn.
*
The night traffic echoes
your deep sleep sounds. A
quiet shore, a soft rumble
receding, rolling over,
coming back.
*
They’re working on a roof. They
talk and hammer. The knocking
stammers through the streets. Their
conversation penetrates the yard.
Not the sense of it, just the sound.
Theirs are the only words around.
*
I shouldn’t mention that your
hair smells like lemons, that the
bed is a mess, that our lives
travel faster approaching the
final station.
*
Arms crossed, button the jacket.
Keep a hornet for a pet or
teach a wolf to ring a bell. You
can bind what’s meant to bite but
you’ll be bound as well.


12 responses so far ↓
Holly D // August 13, 2008 at 2:29 am |
lovely sounds…fun for the mouth!
christine // August 13, 2008 at 2:29 am |
Are these your poems as journal entries? Each one is a tiny gem. Copper dawn is lovely. Whimsical, a hornet as a pet. you have quite an imagination.
nathan1313 // August 13, 2008 at 10:38 am |
Thanks Holly, that’s a great slogan for poetry.
Christine, thank you. They’re kind of like journal entries. When I’m blocked or really tired or something I write stanzas, each around a small idea or phrase or word.
johemmant // August 13, 2008 at 11:15 am |
Two and four are my favourites…..the intimacy is beautiful. That said, who couldn’t love one, three and five *grin*?
nathan1313 // August 13, 2008 at 11:28 am |
Thanks for reading this Jo.
lissa // August 13, 2008 at 12:34 pm |
yep two and four are my favorites too.
all of it is very fresh and intriguing.
nathan1313 // August 13, 2008 at 1:05 pm |
Lissa you’re such a generous reader. Thank you.
Julie // August 13, 2008 at 2:42 pm |
I agree with everyone, and also Christine’s remark about gems. Well put. Each one of these is a gem. My favorite is the night traffic…”receding, rolling over,/coming back.” It’s interesting that they are journal entries, because each one is a complete poem.
Beautiful again, Nathan. You rock!
The Mad Celt // August 13, 2008 at 4:33 pm |
A lightning bolt to the soul, Nathan. Great work.
nathan1313 // August 14, 2008 at 1:21 am |
Thanks Julie. They’re kind of like journal entries. When I write them I think of them as stand-alone stanzas, which would be little poems I guess.
paisley // August 14, 2008 at 2:32 pm |
some timely observations, these… i love little projected bits of wisdom.. nicely done, nathan….
nathan1313 // August 15, 2008 at 3:32 am |
Thanks for reading it.