How many of us would it
take to move the Wal-mart?
Not the sort of move by petition, court or
protest but to push it like a shopping cart.
Just a few inches, maybe a foot to start?
How many around the giant box digging
fingers to foundation? A million muscles
tighten like wound springs until the
concrete block sings and whines. Until the
things inside quake and rock.
Stock topples. Indentured slave-made
shoes lay with soles to heaven. Sweat shop
shirts fall into tired heaps. Fish sticks
leap from the freezer case in a spray of
frost. Bags of chips are lost, smashed like greasy
dominoes.
We inhale dust and grunt. The building jerks. Weight
shifts. We lift left inch by inch and let it
drop about a foot from where it was found. Sirens
sound in the distance. The sign falls
apart. Now it reads “al- art.” We know it will be back.
We know. But for now this is profit’s mausoleum. For
now, this is our museum.


16 responses so far ↓
artpredator // August 12, 2008 at 8:03 am |
gotta love the “soles to heaven” and “al-art” !
very imaginative and playful yet super serious really
kinda reminds me too of my fair poem! a week for whimsical questioning
johemmant // August 12, 2008 at 9:06 am |
Clapping gleeflully, I loved this one……I’ll just substitute any of the big greedy supermarkets over here. So many wonderful lines, surreal touches. Fab.
nathan1313 // August 12, 2008 at 11:29 am |
Thanks artpredator. You’re really good at that mix of serious and playful.
Jo, thank you. I guess there’s no place without its big greedy supermarkets. Eventually there will only be one global greedy supermarket.
Holly D // August 12, 2008 at 8:38 pm |
What a fun poem, in all its seriousness, it’s so fun! I wanna help!
Noah // August 12, 2008 at 10:06 pm |
This is great.
Wal-mart is horrendous, this is true.
White Rose // August 12, 2008 at 10:16 pm |
I’ll be there with you pushing. Terrific piece, loved it! I’m running out of adjectives to describe how much I love the way you write. lol! al-art priceless!
nathan1313 // August 12, 2008 at 10:35 pm |
Holly it looks like there’s a movement brewing.
Thanks very much Noah.
White Rose you say the kindest things. I’m glad you like it.
Regina Clare Jane // August 12, 2008 at 10:41 pm |
Wanted to re-pay the visit- and I simply love this.
You strike a real chord here- although I haven’t set foot near a Wal-Mart in ages, I would do so just to join in the fun…
Well done!
nathan1313 // August 12, 2008 at 10:45 pm |
Thank you. It’s good to see you here.
lissa // August 13, 2008 at 12:35 pm |
fantastic! i was cheering when i read this too and once again breathless by your creativity and originality.
nathan1313 // August 13, 2008 at 1:04 pm |
Thanks! I’m telling you, soon we’ll have enough people — Wal-mart watch out!
Nikki // August 13, 2008 at 4:49 pm |
This is awesome. You took an ugly, boring beast and turned it into a humorous thing of beauty. Thanks for sharing. Nikki
Nikki // August 13, 2008 at 4:50 pm |
Oh and by the way, I’m in if you ever decide to lift up the juggernaut.
nathan1313 // August 14, 2008 at 1:15 am |
Thanks Nikki. I appreciate it. And as you can see the movement is growing.
paisley // August 14, 2008 at 2:35 pm |
this had me thinking about how ants minuscule as they are,, can in reality move something equally as huge as a walmart… and yet we,, the most intellectually “superior” being… can do nothing but bitch……
nathan1313 // August 15, 2008 at 3:33 am |
That’s a great way to put it.