Comments on: Velocity and obligation http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/ poems from here Sun, 13 Dec 2009 17:20:36 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: nathan http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2224 nathan Fri, 05 Jun 2009 12:36:13 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2224 Thanks Holly. Thanks Holly.

]]> By: holly d http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2222 holly d Thu, 04 Jun 2009 22:08:39 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2222 I love when something rhymes, but I don't notice the rhyme so much...that's true here...excellent! I love when something rhymes, but I don’t notice the rhyme so much…that’s true here…excellent!

]]> By: nathan http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2181 nathan Thu, 28 May 2009 12:49:54 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2181 Thanks Donald, but I'm still at Mutating the Signature with Dana too! Thanks Donald, but I’m still at Mutating the Signature with Dana too!

]]> By: Donald Harbour http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2178 Donald Harbour Wed, 27 May 2009 14:01:01 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2178 Well now Nathan! You've come to your senses and reopened your Exhaust Fumes and French Fries restaurant of poetry. Bravo! Serve it up. As for your poem, I too have walked " the crumbling edge" of 'Velocity and Obligation'. Thanks for the company and the good work. Well now Nathan! You’ve come to your senses and reopened your Exhaust Fumes and French Fries restaurant of poetry. Bravo! Serve it up.

As for your poem, I too have walked ” the crumbling edge” of ‘Velocity and Obligation’. Thanks for the company and the good work.

]]> By: nathan http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2175 nathan Tue, 26 May 2009 05:31:18 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2175 Deb, I was driven to change the header again. I think I'll like this one for more than a week. Deb, I was driven to change the header again. I think I’ll like this one for more than a week.

]]> By: nathan http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2173 nathan Tue, 26 May 2009 04:58:21 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2173 Thank you Deb, I'm glad you like the colors. Thank you Deb, I’m glad you like the colors.

]]> By: Deb http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2172 Deb Mon, 25 May 2009 16:43:38 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2172 I understand the flag color thing. This header is beautiful, too. Some of my favorite colors. Like the eyes holding them all. I understand the flag color thing.

This header is beautiful, too. Some of my favorite colors. Like the eyes holding them all.

]]> By: nathan http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2170 nathan Sun, 24 May 2009 00:06:38 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2170 Hi Julie! Thanks so much for the kind words. Hi Julie! Thanks so much for the kind words.

]]> By: Julie http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2169 Julie Sat, 23 May 2009 23:51:19 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2169 I always love the music of your work. Yes, the internal rhyme is spectacular. It echoes from one line to the next and leaves that lovely resonance of sound. Excellent ending, too. I always love the music of your work. Yes, the internal rhyme is spectacular. It echoes from one line to the next and leaves that lovely resonance of sound. Excellent ending, too.

]]> By: nathan http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/velocity-and-obligation/#comment-2168 nathan Fri, 22 May 2009 22:52:32 +0000 http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/?p=823#comment-2168 I'm glad you liked my header Deb, but I just changed it! I liked it too (especially that it looks like a planning grid -- that is just what I was going for. It's part of a collection of things I was doing about the suburbs) but I don't want it to seem to represent the colors of the American flag. Why? I dunno, it's just a thing I have. I’m glad you liked my header Deb, but I just changed it! I liked it too (especially that it looks like a planning grid — that is just what I was going for. It’s part of a collection of things I was doing about the suburbs) but I don’t want it to seem to represent the colors of the American flag. Why? I dunno, it’s just a thing I have.

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