was kissed in the lobby of a Chicago hotel.
traveled in a couch in Columbus, Ohio, five blocks
from Neil Avenue to High Street.
was sent turning into the air off the thumb of a man trying
to decide if he should quit his job as a financial analyst
for Nationwide Insurance.
spent seven years in a coffee can secretly buried under
a backyard pine tree.
died in a Detroit casino.
was born again in exchange for a pillowed tooth.
slipped from a pocket on the bus in Pittsburgh.
paid for crucial car repair in Vancouver.
completed the sum of twenty dollars owed to Scott Fenner
by Brian Thompson on January 13, 1969, as the result
of a bet concerning the probable age of the earth.
disappeared into the carpet of a Kansas City brothel.
slept for an evening in a tip jar at the Rumba Café.
tumbled into the condom dispenser hanging on the Men’s Room
wall at the Flying J Truckstop, Exit 5, Interstate 71.
seemed to be pulled mysteriously from your ear by a young man at the bar.
* * *
This is my response to this week’s prompt at Read Write Poem. The topic is “change.”


35 responses so far ↓
Donald Harbour // May 28, 2009 at 12:03 pm |
Wow! I have always liked to travel, to see new things, and places, although I have never been on an extended sojourn on the back of a quarter. Thanks for the tumbed ride. I really like this poem. I think I’ll keep it.
anisa // May 28, 2009 at 12:09 pm |
This was very cool! I particularly liked the line about how it “spent seven years in a coffee can secretly buried under a backyard pine tree.”
Why was it unburied? What were the other contents? It doesn’t matter. The focus is on the quarter’s journey, and you’ve made it very interesting.
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 12:51 pm |
Thanks Don, you can have it!
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 12:52 pm |
Anisa, thank you so much.
gautami tripathy // May 28, 2009 at 12:53 pm |
Intriguing thoughts. I say cool way of putting it!
it hurt like dead man’s calling
tamra // May 28, 2009 at 1:43 pm |
how fun and how clever you are!
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 1:56 pm |
Thanks Gautami.
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 1:57 pm |
Tamra, I’m glad you like it.
irenet // May 28, 2009 at 2:22 pm |
Unconventional poem and helluva good storytelling.. you know the bit about it being pulled from the ear, it reminds of how the Chinese people in the old days used to keep coins in their ear, dunno if the habit happens elsewhere
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 2:53 pm |
Coins in the ear? That seems like it would be really uncomfortable.
Phil Thrift // May 28, 2009 at 2:59 pm |
Great imagery and word design at every turn.
As usual!
Deb // May 28, 2009 at 3:31 pm |
Fun, evocative, and I like that it “ends” with the magic trick. Lets me think it keeps going on and on and on.
Great take on the prompt.
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 6:55 pm |
Thanks Phil.
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 6:57 pm |
Thank you Deb. I think I’ll stop writing poems that have endings.
angie // May 28, 2009 at 11:45 pm |
When I first saw the title, I thought it was some sort of ode to led zeppelin …then I remembered the prompt.
Very clever. And it does make you wonder–the secrets those quarters could tell.
nathan // May 28, 2009 at 11:49 pm |
Angie, everything I write is, in some way, an ode to led zeppelin.
Jeeves // May 29, 2009 at 4:22 am |
Wow!!!Just love the journey and the places seen. The ending is just perfect.
Erin // May 29, 2009 at 4:33 am |
This is just fanatastic!
nathan // May 29, 2009 at 4:43 am |
Thank you Erin.
ravenswingpoetry // May 29, 2009 at 1:27 pm |
Very cool. I liked your quarter’s travelogue. Well constructed. I kept wanting to read on. Good job.
-Nicole
nathan // May 29, 2009 at 8:35 pm |
Hey Nicole, thank you.
jillypoet // May 30, 2009 at 2:37 am |
Awesome! So clever. Each image is crystal clear. Except, I can’t help but wonder, what year is the quarter?
wayne // May 30, 2009 at 4:26 am |
nice…and I agree “clever” I think I used that quarter in a parking meter in vancouver in 1972
nathan // May 30, 2009 at 11:25 am |
Thanks Jill. And it’s, um, 1961.
nathan // May 30, 2009 at 11:26 am |
Hi Wayne. You have a great memory.
carolee // May 31, 2009 at 1:53 am |
i’m sad to say i have never thought this creatively with money. good thing there are other people out there to do it for me.
(p.s. i want my coffee can of change back. i was saving up for my great escape.)
nathan // May 31, 2009 at 3:58 pm |
Well Carolee, it’s easy to be creative with imaginary money. Ask your local investment banker.
As for that coffee can, there was only $1.37 in there. Where were you going to go?
carolee // May 31, 2009 at 8:58 pm |
i could tell you, but then i’d have to kill you.
Links list « Tejana Poet // June 5, 2009 at 3:53 pm |
[...] poem on the dumping of used technology: The Television Watches You With Contempt. Read also That Quarter by Nathan [...]
Dana // June 7, 2009 at 5:17 pm |
Sigh. Dana goes to MFA program in South Carolina and her writing languishes just as she languishes there in the heat.
Nathan stays home and writes his sweet ass off, blowing everyone out of the water, especially Dana.
So it goes. Education will be the death of me. Or at least of my writing.
Hi.
Anisa // June 8, 2009 at 12:56 pm |
This is an interesting comment, Dana.
You might be interested in this discussion:
http://bjanepr.wordpress.com/2009/06/02/poetic-industrial-complex-outsider-and-insider/#comment-2126
Dana // June 8, 2009 at 3:12 pm
Anisa, I am *very* interested in that discussion. Thank you for pointing me to it.
nathan // June 7, 2009 at 6:07 pm |
Dana, I think sometimes education feels like it will end in death but it rarely does.
Your brilliant writing is indestructible.
Thanks for all the kind words. : )
glasspineconeclusterofswans // July 15, 2009 at 3:20 am |
This wonderful odyssey made my heart very happy today. Your eye for vivid descriptive detail, coupled with bracing directness, just hit it home. Thank you.
nathan // July 15, 2009 at 12:37 pm |
I’m really glad you like this one, glass.