While you slept we lit candles and ate
dinner in silence.
When you were missing, we gave quarters
and oranges to your effigy.
As you fought in the heat, we balanced
our checkbooks.
Waiting for your arrival, we cleaned the living room
and buried the jewelry in the basement.
That time you disappeared, your hat wobbled
above the chair for a second before it fell.
The days you melted we caught you in saucepans
under the card table.
The soil piling above you, we agreed you were lucky
to have the phone.
The bulb cracked and blew. The room was dark. We
rushed for an early summer release.
After you pulled from the driveway, we went to bed
just like every other night.
The smoke, twisting where you stood, seemed
to resemble you.
A leftover leg, the bone slightly chewed, was
the second-to-last thing you touched in this house.
Your net worth remained. It was less than anyone
would mention.


11 responses so far ↓
Dave Bonta // June 20, 2009 at 3:42 pm |
Wow. I really like this.
Dana // June 20, 2009 at 4:00 pm |
Fantastic.
nathan // June 20, 2009 at 4:46 pm |
Thanks very much Dave and Dana.
cocoyea // June 21, 2009 at 4:06 pm |
I really enjoyed the rhythm and the imagery. The title is brilliant. Thanks.
nathan // June 22, 2009 at 12:50 pm |
Thank you, Cocoyea.
Julie // June 23, 2009 at 1:15 am |
Hi, Nathan. Awesome poem! I always love your endings to pieces (in other words, I love them very much). Excellent use of language.
nathan // June 24, 2009 at 11:49 am |
Thanks Julie!
anisa // June 26, 2009 at 11:06 am |
Another good one!
nathan // June 29, 2009 at 6:37 pm |
Thank you Anisa.
Sam // July 1, 2009 at 8:58 am |
My goodness. Although I honestly don’t get the subject of the poem, the images are startlingly striking. I really love how your express speed in this poem
nathan // July 1, 2009 at 6:35 pm |
Thanks Sam, I hadn’t thought about time in the poem.