Comments on: During your absence we hung a marionette in front of the television

By: nathan

nathan — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 18:35:07 +0000

Thanks Sam, I hadn’t thought about time in the poem.

By: Sam

Sam — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 08:58:26 +0000

My goodness. Although I honestly don’t get the subject of the poem, the images are startlingly striking. I really love how your express speed in this poem

By: nathan

nathan — Mon, 29 Jun 2009 18:37:06 +0000

Thank you Anisa.

By: anisa

anisa — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 11:06:57 +0000

Another good one!

By: nathan

nathan — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 11:49:39 +0000

Thanks Julie!

By: Julie

Julie — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 01:15:03 +0000

Hi, Nathan. Awesome poem! I always love your endings to pieces (in other words, I love them very much). Excellent use of language.

By: nathan

nathan — Mon, 22 Jun 2009 12:50:37 +0000

Thank you, Cocoyea.

By: cocoyea

cocoyea — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 16:06:23 +0000

I really enjoyed the rhythm and the imagery. The title is brilliant. Thanks.

By: nathan

nathan — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 16:46:21 +0000

Thanks very much Dave and Dana.

By: Dana

Dana — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 16:00:10 +0000

Fantastic.