I haven’t studied
and how to wear pants in the classroom
baffles me. Conditioned air eerily raises
hairs I didn’t have time to shave. Drama class
saves me. I’ll hide among the painted cardboard
rocks. Either I’ll act my way out of this scene or the writing
will kill me. Great. Now the instructor eyes me suspiciously.
I return the glare with an upturned eyebrow and dig furiously
for a number two pencil. My desk is a patchwork of fossils.
When I need a pointed response, the answer is always missing.
There’s never a hole dark enough to crawl in. Now it’s ten minutes
too late and I’ve accidentally erased everything on the page.
I stare blankly at the flat brown door, the fire alarm’s red pull.
* * *
This is a revision of a poem written line by line with members of the Poetry Collaborative Group at Read Write Poem. If You haven’t been to Read Write Poem yet, I encourage you to stop by. It’s where all the hot poetry action is happening.


10 responses so far ↓
Dick // September 26, 2009 at 6:12 am |
This reiterates to chilling effect the nightmares I’ve seen being enacted before me as I’ve invigilated exams over the years. And my own test horrors as an exam-phobic student. Thanks for the memory!
nathan // September 26, 2009 at 12:33 pm |
I’m glad we could help with that, Dick. Thanks for reading.
Elizabeth Switaj // September 26, 2009 at 12:26 pm |
I really like how lines 2-3 make a slight twist on the typical classroom nudity nightmare.
nathan // September 26, 2009 at 12:34 pm |
Thanks, Elizabeth!
barbara_y // September 26, 2009 at 4:04 pm |
Way better than my effort. You gave it one voice, and the patchwork of fossils desk
nathan // October 6, 2009 at 12:33 am |
Barbara, yours is great.
cocoyea // October 1, 2009 at 11:31 pm |
“Either I’ll act my way out of this scene or the writing
will kill me.” Fantastic. I will check out Read Write Poem. Thanks.
nathan // October 6, 2009 at 12:33 am |
Yes, check out Read Write Poem! You’ll love it.
holly d // October 18, 2009 at 3:00 am |
Oh Nathan, school…I hope my class doesn’t feel like that…I think one of them does! (oh no)…
I know that feeling…oh me…the white blank walls and the horrible lighting gets to me most of all
nathan // October 21, 2009 at 5:10 pm |
Thanks for reading, Holly.