1.
A camera catches an act of theft. A hand
slides into a purse. A purse is held under
a slot machine. Someone wants a machine
to protect commercial interests. Someone
lies frozen on the couch during a commercial.
Frozen hope leads to lapsed expectations.
Lapsed logic gets lost in a file. A lost voice
won’t return. The senator is screaming
about the return of the steam engine.
The street steams: we need antennae to find
our hotel. Our ancient antennae are useless.
We just stare at each other.
2.
For details on corporate corruption we milk
the book. For us, books are bricks, though some argue
flames or wings. Under the wing of a 747 our house
looks tiny. This house is full of anger over the point
-count of antlers. The senator points to the birth
rate as a sign of his decline. We aren’t convinced.
Convinced our obsolete machines are suicidal,
his followers push typewriters from bridges.
The bridge buckles as an acrobat balances on a wire
above an earthquake. During the ground-breaking
the senator kisses a constituent’s neck.
We aren’t having fun.
* * *
This is the beginning of what I hope will be a series of poems.


10 responses so far ↓
Joseph Harker // October 7, 2009 at 3:47 am |
Interesting. Was there a particular motivation for this?
nathan // October 7, 2009 at 4:56 pm |
Well, I’m thinking of ways to mark coherence in the poem that don’t rely so much on traditional narrative elements. So I’m trying repetition between sentences.
dana // October 7, 2009 at 3:28 pm |
I hope so, too. Keep going!
nathan // October 7, 2009 at 4:57 pm |
Thanks Dana. I’ll try!
Deb // October 14, 2009 at 2:56 pm |
I like the repetition, the cycling. It’s fascinating to read the gears kind of miss and catch again. (My weird metaphor — whatever!) Adds to the mechanistic sense, which I really like. A lot.
More, please, sir.
nathan // October 15, 2009 at 10:02 pm |
I like the gears missing and catching — that’s a good way to put it. Thanks for reading, Deb.
holly d // October 18, 2009 at 3:02 am |
love the repetition of words used in such different ways, and also the coldness of the tone
nathan // October 21, 2009 at 5:10 pm |
Thanks, Holly.
o-zone // October 28, 2009 at 10:47 pm |
nice…real nice…maybe…It’s just the feel I’m getting from it….somewhat…anti-corporate…pointing the finger in the right direction…just looked around at my fellow humans..the morale is low!!
nathan // November 9, 2009 at 9:29 pm |
Thanks o-zone.